Student Writing

Moving

inspired by Esmeralda Santiago's When I Was Puerto Rican

Bruny Rivera
Grade 10

We moved to Macun
when I was four
Outside the new house
I saw a circle of red dirt.

I didn't like it

We moved to Macun.
The window was metal
I burned my finger

Never touch a wall on the sunny side

We moved to Macun
I had rust on my fingers
I licked them, a dry metallic taste
curled the tip of my tongue

I couldn't suck my thumb that night

We moved to Macun
I screamed, imagining my skin disappearing
Into chunks, into the invisible
mouths of hundreds of tiny black
specks creeping into parts

We moved to Macun
I turned away from her, my mother,
And curled into a tight ball of shame